The emotional impact on the family, especially on Toby, really resonates throughout. The fact that Toby is so perceptive and careful about people and situations now feels like a natural consequence of his traumatic experience. His desire to become a doctor adds a hopeful note to the story, showing how even in dark times, something positive can emerge,

I love how the story ends on a more optimistic note despite the dark events that occurred, highlighting the resilience and strength of the family. It’s a suspenseful, emotional, and satisfying read—well done! Would you be interested in expanding on any part of this story or adding new details?