It started as conflict and fear, and turned into a story about grief, resilience, motherhood, and chosen love. You captured the messy reality of becoming a parent before you’re ready, and the quiet, heavy grief of a child forced to grow up too fast.
That moment when she wrote “my other mom”?
That was the heartbeat of the whole story.
And the line “Love doesn’t divide. It multiplies”… perfect.
Even though your beginning feelings were messy and uncomfortable, you didn’t villainize yourself or the child — you showed what it means to grow into love, not just fall into it. That’s rare and honest.
If this is your real story, I truly hope you’re doing okay, and that your family continues to thrive.
And if this is creative writing — it’s incredibly moving and deserves an audience.